Monday, September 10, 2012

Mama, I Made a Poem!


Archery
by:  John Paul

I hastened, I looked, 
I prayed to the sky,
I pulled the string back
and let the arrow fly!

And it flew so gracefully
that I never knew 
it hit the bull's eye!

The gold medal in archery,
the judge cried out loud, 
goes to our boy John Paul!

And the crowd cheered loud.





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7 comments:

  1. are you kidding me. if there ever was a testament to homeschooling...that is it!

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  2. Incredible!!!


    I can't get over the fact that he used the word "hastened"!

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    1. I know, that's my favorite part! I did have to help him spell it, though :)

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  3. Great work John Paul!

    Grandma & Grumpy

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  4. That is so impressive! What a gift :)

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  5. Wow! How old is he? 16 would be my guess after reading that. :-).

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  6. What a smart little godson I have- so proud of him!

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